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Lethal Weapon - Black's "killer ninja" first draft from 1985.


Some time ago i posted a topic about Shane Black's infamous original draft of Lethal Weapon 2, asking for help with finding out any info about it or even some way to find a copy of the script. While still looking for anything about that script, i was reminded on Black's comments about his very first draft of first Lethal Weapon.

For those of you who don't know about it, here's some info about it from Trivia;

Shane Black's first draft of Lethal Weapon which he wrote sometime in 1985 was very different, not just from his later drafts but also from the final movie. This first draft was 141 pages long and it had alternate plot parts, character scenes, action sequences and many other differences, like entire ending which had big chase scene including helicopters and a trailer truck full of cocaine which explodes over Hollywood Hills causing for cocaine to start snowing over Hollywood sign. Riggs was also much different character in this first draft than he is in the movie. Black at first thought that this draft (which was one of his first scripts) sucks so he threw it in the garbage but later changed his mind and re-worked it into the new drafts. For the longest time, Black was the only one who had copy of his first draft until he sold it on auction. This draft still remains some of his most wanted work amongst fans.
Going from info i read and heard from other fans of the LW films and Black, this script still exists but the person who has it (and who has probably bought it from Black) didn't do anything about sharing it with other fans or at least make like a scan of it and upload it online.

Other info i heard is how some parts of this script were later re-used by Black in his other scripts. The scene in The Last Boy Scout where Joe kills a guy by punching his nose into the brain was apparently in that first Lethal Weapon script, and action scene which includes some huge vehicle full of cocaine blowing up and cocaine snowing over L.A was also in his rejected script for Lethal Weapon 2 (in the LW script it was a trailer truck, while in LW 2 script it was a plane).

And probably most interesting bits of rumors amongst the fans about Black's first draft of Lethal Weapon is how Riggs died in the ending, and how apparently in this script Riggs was some kind of killer ninja. Here's some message boards i found where fans talked about it;

http://messageboard.donedealpro.com/boards/showthread.php?t=41452
"and wasn't his very first draft of Lethal 1 more dark, making Riggs a ninja-obsessed freak or something too?"

http://messageboard.donedealpro.com/boards/showthread.php?t=57159&page=2
"I am sure Shane's infamous "killing off Riggs" draft of Lethal Weapon 2 is at the Margaret Herrick script library in LA isn't it? Plus his "killer ninjas" first draft of Lethal 1..."

A guy who claims he has copy of this draft and he too says that in this draft Riggs is a ninja;
https://twitter.com/hashtag/alwaysberewriting

So, if anyone knows more about this script or knows a way to get it and share with rest of the fans, or just wants to share their thoughts about all this, go right ahead.

Speaking as someone who read couple of different drafts of first Lethal Weapon and Black's first script Shadow Company, i'm pretty sure that his first draft of LW was not that bad, but of course, i would have to read it first to say that for sure.

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Read it. No ninjas, but Riggs enjoys playing with shirukens. Doesn't die in the end.

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Read it. No ninjas, but Riggs enjoys playing with shirukens.
Thank you very much for sharing that bit of info. From what you said in your only other message here, i'm pretty sure i can believe you. It's always great to hear any interesting info from people like you, specially in cases when there is almost nothing else where you can find anything about certain movies.

Doesn't die in the end.
What's interesting is how although he was one of the people who rejected Shane Black's script for second film mostly because Riggs died in the end, director Richard Donner said in interview few years back how they actually thought about killing Riggs in the first film, so i'm guessing that's where the rumors about him dying at the end of original script for first film came from.

I must apologize in advance, but i can't help but to be curious for more info. Can you mention some other differences between original first draft of Lethal Weapon and later drafts and/or final film?

Like i said, i do have couple of drafts of the script from '86 and honestly, while i really like the film i like Black's script even more. It's just feels like it has more guts to it, with the way characters, plot and action is written. Personally if any of those drafts was used for filming i think it would make the film even better, no matter how long it is (since i'm pretty sure that based on those drafts movie would probably ended up being two hours long).

Reason why i'm so interested in finding out more about this draft is not only because i am a fan of first two Lethal Weapon films, but also because i'm curious to find out what exactly was different and apparently so bad in first draft of LW that Black threw it into the garbage after he was done with it. Only source where i ever heard him talking about his first draft is in making of documentary about the first film called "Psycho Pension: The Genesis of Lethal Weapon" from Blu-Ray collection of all four films, and in one of the interviews Black mentioned how the first draft was a "kitchen sink" of a script which was much bigger in scale and it had completely different ending, which i already mentioned in my first message. He also said how when he was re-writing the script he added more character stuff into it.

Also, if you happen to know something about Black's script for Lethal Weapon 2, which he wrote with Warren Murphy and which was also called Play Dirty, please let me know on this topic here where i posted only info about it that is known to fans. Let me tell you, you wouldn't believe how much people and fans want to read this script, which Black said was the best script he ever wrote, and apparently he's the only one who still has copy of it;

http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0000948/board/thread/257280056

Thank you once again for replying and sharing what you know about the first draft of Lethal Weapon, and take care.

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Interesting that you mention Murphy, from what I understand Riggs and Murtaugh were based on Murphys series about an older black cop and his hot headed younger white partner who were constantly bickering, the series was Razoni and Jackson.

Here is a post from Murphy's Facebook page which was confirmed by his son as accurate.

"My understanding is that Shane used the razoni and Jackson series while still in college for his degree. Came out so good he used it in the first lethal weapon. When it hit he brought warren in to consult on the second so he would get financial compensation for the previous. Also why Shane is interested in remo"

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only problem with this detail is the fact that Murtaugh was white in the screenplay, as written by Black, and it was Donner who chose to cast Danny Glover.

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No ninja stuff -- just a suggestion that Riggs is taken with artifacts like shirukens -- which, in the first draft, he uses to paralyze a man's radial nerve. Also, Riggs never did die in the first draft -- it ended hopefully on page 141.. He died in the end of the 1st Lethal 2 draft, though -- written in late 1987.

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No ninja stuff -- just a suggestion that Riggs is taken with artifacts like shirukens -- which, in the first draft, he uses to paralyze a man's radial nerve. Also, Riggs never did die in the first draft -- it ended hopefully on page 141.. He died in the end of the 1st Lethal 2 draft, though -- written in late 1987.
Thanks again for sharing some info about the script. Yeah all of us Lethal Weapon and Shane Black fans know lot about his rejected Play Dirty script for second film. I asked you this before, but can you share some more details about that script if you ever read it? I know that it was much darker and bloodier, there were some really nasty torture scenes in it, couple action sequences included one taking place during big brush fire and one had plane full of cocaine exploding over L.A and then cocaine starts snowing all over the city. There is some more info about it here, in case if you are interested;

https://wikipedia.org/wiki/Lethal_Weapon_2#Shane_Black_and_Warren_Murphy.27s_original_Play_Dirty_script

http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0097733/trivia?ref_=ttfc_ql_trv_1

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Have you gotten ahold of the original Lethal Weapon script? if you don't then PM and i can pass it.

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Already got it. It looks like it started showing up on lot of the sites about movie scripts. Without spoiling anything, i will just say that i fkng loved it, and original ending was insane! To all of you other Shane Black/Lethal Weapon fans reading this, go and find this script and read it for yourself.

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Yeah, i think it dropped this week; once more than 2 people have a copy of a script it will spread like wild fire.

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