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beginning screenwriting 101 forgot the third act


I liked this film, but . . . as with many screenplays, it forgot to include act 3. That is, Act 1 and plot point--he gets fired; act 2--he finds himself by starting a food truck. Success. Fade to black. If the film seems a little too simplistic and hollow, it's really because he forgot to develop the third act. A little resolution with the food critic, but none with Scarlett Johanssen and other old friends/enemies, etc. Just has a problem and he finds solution. No more development or complexity which the film needed to be truly satisfying. the formulas are there for a reason! -jcc

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Well, the first act took nearly an hour into a less than 2-hour-long film. From then on it was pretty obvious that this wasn't a very tight script.

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Was definitely missing something, enjoyed it throughout but in the end it just fell flat. Sort of film I'd watch again whilst doing something else.. no concentration required.

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that's not screenwriting 101, that's hollywood 101. this movie is hollywood no doubt, but fortunately did not follow all the rules.

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that's not screenwriting 101, that's hollywood 101. this movie is hollywood no doubt, but fortunately did not follow all the rules.


Totally agree. Hollywood movies follow the 3-act structure where everything is neatly wrapped up in a cute little package with a bow at the end. Jon Favreau knows all about Hollywood, and he obviously doesn't give a *beep*. I say good for him.

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not every movie has to be a cardboard cut out dude. He didnt "forget" to write it, he just decided not to because... Why *beep* not? Shakes things up a little.

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Who really cares other than stuck up "screenwriters"?

Not many people watch a film thinking about the three act structure. I couldn't care less as long as I enjoyed what I saw.

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Just to let everyone know, I will soon be rich!! I am developing a ladder for all the armchair screenwriters to use, to make it easier get up on their high horses.

I don't love her.. She kicked me in the face!!

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Does it HAVE to follow a formula?

No resolution was needed with Molly, the Scarlett Johanssen character...and i think it was intentional. Their relationship isn't fully defined. Are they just good friends? Are they knocking boots? We don't know. Any 'resolution' would involve that barrier being broken.


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Agreed!

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